Tuesday, August 16, 2005

Lets walk towards each other

I can just about take 4 steps towards you and then stop... I canIf I did less, then I wud not have tried enuf... and if I did more, you'd think Im desperate. And when I am just about finished taking my 4 steps... I guess Ill wait in hope that you take ur 1st.
:: posted by RagsInRags, 10:28 PM

9 Comments:

wow
Anonymous Anonymous, at 16 August, 2005 23:28  
Gee Thnx Santy,
But guess wot, M still waiting n pretty soon m gonna run out of patience ;)
Blogger RagsInRags, at 17 August, 2005 12:55  
There's a new entry on my blog. Check it out..
Blogger Nidhi, at 17 August, 2005 13:27  
good one rags..liked the last two lines of it the most
Anonymous Anonymous, at 17 August, 2005 13:43  
Anonymous,
a-huh! Got a compliment frm u on ma post eh? Nieeessss
Blogger RagsInRags, at 17 August, 2005 19:47  
last two lines yes..nice..by the way WHO IS DAT GIRL???? Hmmm????
Anonymous Anonymous, at 18 August, 2005 01:34  
Bas kya Komal,
U shud kno by now that all girls (in this context) are always fictional in my life :D
Blogger RagsInRags, at 18 August, 2005 10:56  
YEAH CRAP AS IF I DUNNO....
Anonymous Anonymous, at 22 August, 2005 03:55  
hi,

was going through ur writing here and just noticed something interesting.
in one poem the girl who acknowledged you - you ran away from. and now someone who is a cool with you, perks up your interest.
not so different from leagues of other men are you? LOL.
but you write well. poems being better than prose.

keep writing.
Anonymous Anonymous, at 27 September, 2005 11:41  

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